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You should. *nods sagely* ^_^ [Added more of Armin's imagined compensations, just for you.]

Ah, I was trying to fit the Hell-and-German quote in there, but the spacing was being difficult. Same with the tropics one: there was something about the Polish winter and ...

I was bored. They're not the best, but I ran out of time. -- 1. Todesmaschine 2. Optimistic Armin 3. Compensation #1 4. Compensation #2 5. Compensation #3 6. Compensation ...

Only you, my dear Till, would draw an SS Oberführer Apple. Actually, I think it has potential. As you say, it is just a rough sketch after all. You've got ...

I like the second one (of the previous photo post) the best - the blue is so vivid against the ground. =)

The Artist's Reality: Philosophies of Art by Mark Rothko. It's excellent.

I, like Rachet, haven't the time at the moment to go through it line by line and point out errors, but as far as the tone of the writing goes, ...

*le gasp* My Killer Penguin(s)! =P

Dein kritik, mein Herr. ... Good Points : First off, the writing in this piece was very vivid and sharp, extremely enjoyable to read. The description was deeply colorful , ...

Well, there's really no set rule for that; it's mostly a matter of what you're comfortable with. Personally, I like to start a new thread for each new draft and ...

o.o What Matt said. XD

Ooh, I do like this new version much better. The flow, the mood and the tone has been improved twice over. Really wonderful work on the rewrite. Haha, and you're ...

Hey Kingdom, Sorry to be the odd-man-out, but I liked this quite a lot. It has a lot of potential. ^_^ While I do think that the format has to ...

I second Winters - Revelations should do the trick singlehandedly.

8/10 Funny, even if I'm not one with the inside joke. ^~